Thursday, March 10, 2011

feeling of research project

It's interesting that you can research the knowledge what you really interented in. This is my first time to the research paper, so excited. thanks Patricia and Scott. They gave me many useful suggestion. Next time i do the presentation i will make sure that i deeply understand the black hole and wormhole. And think about the problem that if i meet another me in the future or past and some quetions which my beloved classmates asked me.Also, that is my first time to do the ppt, so maybe there are some disadvantages but i will make it better next time. i felt very relieved when i finished the research paper and presentation.

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

advertisement

Nowadays,advertisement is out of control that means you can see advertisements everywhere. So in the competition world, what kinds of advertisement can get more attention. in my opinion, creative is the key word to answer the question. For example, durex made an ad that is about condoms. the ad didn't mention any function of durex condoms. But the bag of durex condom went throughout the whole ad. that bag descended slowly and lightly from a high floor, and when every couple in each floor saw the bag drifting outside the window, their hormone suddenly raised even the very old couple. Finally, the bag fell on a police car's windshield, then two policemen became very ambiguous. It's so funny that a bag of durex condom can make two males to fall into a relationship in the end of the ad! haha! and the  background music is Queen for the Night which can give us enthusiasm.
you can check the ad from this website if you really interested in:http://www.upvideo.nl/upvideo_video.aspx?sr=1&vid=k1difqroEU-SfZiGdW5e4Q

Thursday, February 17, 2011

the population of China

in China, we can feel the  pressure from the huge population. When we take a metro to school on the morning in Guangzhou, you can feel this perssure. a large number of people go to work and school at the same time that even you cannot get into the metro. however, i think all the developing countries have this problem. viewed from the developing of China, young population is still a significant problem. young people have to feed, they need money, but they are not productive. we worry about the young population will decline the economy. but the goverment encourage young people to study hard and learn the technology, when they step into the society they can work for China. i believe that China can keep develooping.

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Ronaldo gone, but not forgotten

Ronaldo, a soccer player who shot 400 goals on his career. But now, he is not young any more, he have to leave the pitch. Ronaldo is the one of only two men win three FIFA world player of the year awards. From Barcelona to Real Madrid, Internazionale to AC Milan, he made his great mark with the different clubs in the history of the game. However, no matter which club he work for, he is the best player in the competition. People said that he is unlucky, he always seemed to play for the right club at the wrong time. 
In 1998 World Cup, Ronaldo leaded his country to the final against the host mation, France. Unfortunately, Brazilian fell to a 3-0 defeat. Four years later, Ronaldo leaded his team to the final against Germany again. Ronaldo shut two goals to help his country to win the fifth and most recent world championship.
But these honors all gone pass, Ronaldo fell into the bad trouble. He became very fat caused his life stule choice and he couldn't run fast as pass. he had only seven goals  in 14 appearances at the end of the 2006-7 season and just six more the following year. from then on, a great soccer player fell away.
we will never forget him, the hero of Brazilians.

Monday, February 7, 2011

copy from the internet:how to write an essay

i hope this post can be very helpful for our classmate!

Brief Overview of the 10 Essay Writing Steps

Below are brief summaries of each of the ten steps to writing an essay. Select the links for more info on any particular step, or use the blue navigation bar on the left to proceed through the writing steps. How To Write an Essay can be viewed sequentially, as if going through ten sequential steps in an essay writing process, or can be explored by individual topic.
1. Research: Begin the essay writing process by researching your topic, making yourself an expert. Utilize the internet, the academic databases, and the library. Take notes and immerse yourself in the words of great thinkers.
2. Analysis: Now that you have a good knowledge base, start analyzing the arguments of the essays you're reading. Clearly define the claims, write out the reasons, the evidence. Look for weaknesses of logic, and also strengths. Learning how to write an essay begins by learning how to analyze essays written by others.
3. Brainstorming: Your essay will require insight of your own, genuine essay-writing brilliance. Ask yourself a dozen questions and answer them. Meditate with a pen in your hand. Take walks and think and think until you come up with original insights to write about.
4. Thesis: Pick your best idea and pin it down in a clear assertion that you can write your entire essay around. Your thesis is your main point, summed up in a concise sentence that lets the reader know where you're going, and why. It's practically impossible to write a good essay without a clear thesis.
5. Outline: Sketch out your essay before straightway writing it out. Use one-line sentences to describe paragraphs, and bullet points to describe what each paragraph will contain. Play with the essay's order. Map out the structure of your argument, and make sure each paragraph is unified.
6. Introduction: Now sit down and write the essay. The introduction should grab the reader's attention, set up the issue, and lead in to your thesis. Your intro is merely a buildup of the issue, a stage of bringing your reader into the essay's argument.
(Note: The title and first paragraph are probably the most important elements in your essay. This is an essay-writing point that doesn't always sink in within the context of the classroom. In the first paragraph you either hook the reader's interest or lose it. Of course your teacher, who's getting paid to teach you how to write an essay, will read the essay you've written regardless, but in the real world, readers make up their minds about whether or not to read your essay by glancing at the title alone.)
7. Paragraphs: Each individual paragraph should be focused on a single idea that supports your thesis. Begin paragraphs with topic sentences, support assertions with evidence, and expound your ideas in the clearest, most sensible way you can. Speak to your reader as if he or she were sitting in front of you. In other words, instead of writing the essay, try talking the essay.
8. Conclusion: Gracefully exit your essay by making a quick wrap-up sentence, and then end on some memorable thought, perhaps a quotation, or an interesting twist of logic, or some call to action. Is there something you want the reader to walk away and do? Let him or her know exactly what.
9. MLA Style: Format your essay according to the correct guidelines for citation. All borrowed ideas and quotations should be correctly cited in the body of your text, followed up with a Works Cited (references) page listing the details of your sources.
10. Language: You're not done writing your essay until you've polished your language by correcting the grammar, making sentences flow, incoporating rhythm, emphasis, adjusting the formality, giving it a level-headed tone, and making other intuitive edits. Proofread until it reads just how you want it to sound. Writing an essay can be tedious, but you don't want to bungle the hours of conceptual work you've put into writing your essay by leaving a few slippy misppallings and pourly wordedd phrazies..


good luck

Sunday, February 6, 2011

Slaughtered sled dogs

    Would you believe that dozens of sled dogs were slaughtered and blanketed by several feet of snow? We can learn this message according to The Globe And Mail. Sled dogs' location wanted to keep the secret to escape away from the investigation. Because the sled dogs are not useful anymore, then the employee can kill them without guity consience. I believe they will keep killing the poor sled dogs if BPCA or RCMP didn't do the investigation. Marcie Moriarty who is the B.C. SPCA's cruelty investigations manager insist to get more sufficient evidence. He said" i'm hopeful that there's going to be sufficient evidence once we complete our investigation that the bodies in the grave aren't necessarily required."
    Sled dogs have souls like human being, why they can kill many lifes unlimitedly? i think the goverment should set up some law to protect sled dogs and other animals. From this news i also found that a facebook group is very justice and caring, i pround the people who treat animals as human being.
    Animals they are able to feel pain, sad, but many people do the cruel things to them as they should be seffered. If one day, there is another organism more powerful than human being, and they treat us as we treat the little animals, what will you think at that moment? Please give the rights for animals, they are the friends of us and we live together on the earth.

Sunday, January 16, 2011

true or false

it seems a funny post hahha.

1.i am homesick now.

2.i like to date with a girl.

3.i did the composition this weekend.

4.i chatted with Angela tonight.